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"Me: Are you sure ?
Ruhig: Well, ther is a lot to be worked on, your lines are lazy, I see basically no hair, and no light manipulation....
Me: Alright ! I understand....you devil.
Ruhig: But keep going, you'll get the hang of it soon enough.
Me: *mumbles*
Ruhig: Want a glass of wine and a satiric anecdote ?
Me: Yes please !
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CigarsCigarettes Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Of course there will be parts that need further work, but the first impression is very good, you have my word for it. Plus I've got to know Ruhig a bit through the last year and this oh so charming glance you gave him is so very HIM ^^
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bently96 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
Yes I know. Ruhig alreay told me what's wrong XD...like he even knows ;)
Thank you :3
I am so glad to hear those words from you *insert your name here* ( I don't know if you allow me spelling it here outloud ;) Anyhow....thanks ^__^
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BubblegumBloo Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You have a really great sense of perspective, and that's gonna come in good use a lot in the future, believe me :D
Loving the angle you drew him from ^^ The way you drew his mane is EXCELLENT. Other than that, keep practicing with the anatomy and you'll be getting there soon :thumbsup:
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bently96 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
Not really, I wanted to make him look as if he stays in a half profile...instead it's like you look at him from above ^^; But I am grateful for the kind words :D
Thanks for all :hug:
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zilvart Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
maybe you should look up references. in my opinion there are no shame in that  the legs are slightly off proportion and the belly get narrower towards the back legs try indicate the rib cage first:D but the head are good but as you probably can see the eye if it would open would cover the ear. the eye would be lower. however i love the use of forms to get the structure right actually thats something i have problem with at times. pony legs are also  narrower more towards where they are atached to^^ hope this helps.
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bently96 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
Hmm, trying t indicate a rib cage first ? You mean I should try and when creating a body frame show more fragments the "butt" and the "rib cage" ? ^^;
Well, thanks for the head :D And yes, I know I should perfect the eye positions :) But hey may'be that's my style ? ;)
Could you explain better the legs issue ? )
And yes, it helps quite a lot :D
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zilvart Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
well it looks really nice with the eye in that proportion. it could always be a style. and the leg issue just look up anatomy or just look at many pictures of ponies you might understand  and ya the rib cage just lightly suggest the form of it or just draw a circle in that sice meybe i could make a tutorial? anyway all the animals have a rib cage it helps to draw mostly anything. and also try to have the legs flatter on the ground i think that might helps it looks like they are existing in a weird perspective. but the head suggest something else. the left front leg is not working anatomically you will understand if you just look a few seconds of horse anatomy that's what i did a few seconds to see how the legs may bend. and the back legs are tricky ones in my opinion but just look around and see how others do it. it took me a while to understand how it works in different angles.
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bently96 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
Great critic by the way ;)
I'll look up into it :D
And...I didn't draw the robcage as a circle, I just doodles a huge oval for the entire body ^^; Seems I messed up the proportions ^^; Wanted to make him look more proud :)
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zilvart Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
its ok^^
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bently96 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
:)
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